The wanting of one
To wander that day willed
There’re people known
While some are not
Suddenly a woman
With beauty that day filled
The idea that’s untrue
That in the mind turned flat
To wander that day willed
There’re people known
While some are not
Suddenly a woman
With beauty that day filled
The idea that’s untrue
That in the mind turned flat
Tried to befriend through tongue
Composure not considered
But the confidence won
From within withered
To vanish is the future
Of what have felt claimed not love
Like a bubble well made
Will never reach above
Been long since fooling
It is just appreciation to believe
Flowing with the laughter
But in inside grieves
Happiness as if real
Shown as if felt
Smiles and cheers
Though pain dwelt
Another man came in
Perfection can be seen
It’s not the bearer of pen
Thus life was taken then
For this dead heart
Was numb enough from any hurts;
Just to name it love
The heart was thrown to lion’s den
10 comments:
You have a good heart and a kind soul, Jay :)
Thank you for your comment! I enjoyed this! :) Keep the good stuff coming!
Like a bubble made
will never reach above.
Astute metaphor. I like it.
Thanks for checking out my blog.
BQ
This is a good little site, i enjoy seeing what you've done Rafi.
Hi Rafi,
Great poem....
Thank you for visiting my site and for your comments :-D
I have GOT to learn to write some poetry. You do some good ones! This was really romantic here! KC
Thank you Antonioni for the appreciation.
Stacey, thanks for the good words.
KC, yes it's romantic, but it's a sad romance.
So true what you said on my blog. The thing is... those that stuck in their problems will remain with problems. And when I refer to "those", I have to only look in the mirror because that is only one that I can affect. And even though I overcame a very big hurdle, every day, you know that tiny problems can become big ones if I let them. So, I attack them one at a time, I hope... :) KC
That's the spirit KC
wow nice raf,. sunggo.,. hahaha =))
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